Thursday, March 7, 2013

Extended Essay 2 Revised


Oscar Pistorius
           
            Oscar Pistorius may be best known for his performance in the London Olympic Games. As the first Paralympic athlete to compete against able-bodied athletes, Pistorius was thrown into the spotlight. He attracted multiple media sites, and as his story spread so did his fame. Soon Pistorius was considered a hero by many; he even gained sponsorships from brands such as Nike and Oakley. Even through Pistorius didn't place in the Olympics; he was one of the most popular athletes of the summer. However, this swift rise to fame seemed to push Pistorius past his limits. On Friday February 15th newspapers around the world were littered with Pistorius's name once again. Unfortunately, this time instead of fame the headlines were broadcasting murder. On Valentine's Day February 14th, in South Africa Pistorius was believed to have shot his girlfriend to death in their home.
In the weeks following the death of Pistorius's girlfriend, multiple news sources followed and report on the story. The general details of the death remained the same, but as more news sources covered the story and new details emerged, the story began to morph and change. Depending on what audience the news source was targeting and what details they chose to focus on, the changes were evident in the story each source reported. The multiple lives that a news story takes on can be referred to as a 'news sphere'.  In this news sphere, stories branch off on another as they begin to develop. These stories all share a common central theme but each story is unique in its own way. Following the story of Oscar Pistorius the central point of the story is the murder of his girlfriend, and by analyzing five news sources the 'news sphere' of this story is evident.   
            As gun shots were heard at 4am in the morning, neighbors began to wonder what had occurred at the home of Oscar Pistorius. When police arrived they discovered Reeva Steenkamp dead at the scene. Many newspapers in South Africa were quick to report the story, and by 9am on February 14th the word had spread about the country's star athlete killing his girlfriend in the night. The Star newspaper in Johannesburg, South Africa was one of the first to report on what had occurred. This news report was very short and to the point. In the case of The Star, only the basic news was provided on what had occurred. It was reported that "a 26 year old man, reportedly Paralympian Oscar Pistorius, had been arrested for allegedly shooting a woman dead"(Star). The story also reported that "a 9mm pistol was recovered"(Sapa) from the crime scene. The goal of this sort of report is to simply get the story out to people. With only basic information little can be said about how or why the murder occurred. When a story first arises the author reports the basic facts in a simple manner that is accessible to a variety of people. The intended audience of the Pistorius piece is everyone. Even if readers won't follow up on the stories that follow this report, the paper wants this news to be known to a large spectrum of people. Once this information has been reported and new details emerge then the story can begin to grow. In the story of Pistorius, The Star newspaper is the first step to creating a 'news sphere'. The Star creates the initial spark that is then picked up by other news sources that add other facts and opinions to the piece.
            Twenty four hours after the first report in South Africa, the story of Pistorius hit one of the United States' largest news sites, The New York Times. In the article published by this source, details of Steenkamp's death fill the first few paragraphs. However, the rest of the story delivers background information about Pistorius and his girlfriend, and reports about gun control in South Africa. Instead of focusing on the death and the details of what happened, The New York Times focuses on Pistorius's past and the violence that is common in South Africa. After a detailed description of Pistorius's Olympic achievements, the article then shares an interview with his father. Pistorius's father commented on the incident saying, "I have no clue what happened...I don't discuss my son's relationships. I have, in fact, not met the lady"(The New York Times). By adding an interview from Pistorius's father, the article adds greater depth into the life of Pistorius. This information allows the reader to assess how they feel about Pistorius and to take a stance on what has occurred. The article ends with the discussion of gun use in South Africa and adds statistics about gun control in the past ten years. The New York Times chose to introduce new background information to the initial story of murder. Since few details are available, the article instead looks into the past of Pistorius to find possible motives for the murder. The New York Times didn't have any new information to report but to make this news story their own they added more information. The addition of background information is used to address the audience of the article. The story occurred in a country outside the United States, and as a result many people may not know who Pistorius is or why this issue gained so much attention. In order to make the article more accessible to a wider range of people, The New York Times includes background information not only about those involved but also about the country in which the event occurred. Adding background information is a way that a news source can alter a story therefore altering the view of the audience. In the case of The New York Times, the additional information draws the attention away from the murder and tries to uncover details of why it occurred. This news source also takes some of the negative views of Pistorius away by reporting on the violence that is already significant in South Africa. When relating this story to the 'news sphere', this report can be considered premature, the story made a first step by traveling from one continent to another however, more details are still required before the story can expand further.
            On February 17th, three days after the initial report, details about the murder incident finally emerged. On CBS News there was an article titled South African newspaper sheds doubt on Oscar Pistorius's accidental shooting claim. This article ties the reports in the United States back to two African news sources. Since this incident did not occur in the United States, news sources must rely on African news sources for information. Relying on other sites in an article appears to give the article more validity however, it also has the affect of not delivering the full story. The article in CBS News provides a summary of the report published by the African newspaper City Press. The story in CBS News is short and simply delivers the message without much interpretation. The article is aimed at those who have been following the story of the Pistorius murder case. The article assumes that the reader knows the background information and focuses purely on the new details in the case. The CBS News report adds more details to the story by sharing these details from news sources reporting form Africa. The purpose of this report is similar to that of The Star, this article simply delivers the details of the murder creating a new spark for other news sources to embellish. This spark created by the emergence of details is just another part of the 'news sphere'. It opens up more pathways for news sources to branch out from stringing together a larger web surrounding the central point. A story has the ability to continue endlessly as long as different sources continue to add to it. However, once the 'news sphere' expands to a certain extent the information being analyzed can then change from fact to opinion.
                        Eventually after a story has been reported for a period of time and all the details have been covered, the story loses its steam. At this point in time writers begin to write more opinionated pieces about the issue and reflect on what has occurred. In these types of opinion pieces, the author chooses whether they agree or disagree with the issue at hand. Generally this results in either a positive or negative reflection in the writing. Cynthia Falardeau published a piece in the CNN Opinion section of the news site titled What my son taught me about Oscar Pistorius. In her writing she discussed how her amputee son taught her to accept that Oscar Pistorius is just a man and that like all people he makes mistakes too. In this piece, the original story is barely mentioned. The focus of this piece is what has been learned from Pistorius's mistake. In closing the piece Falardeau says, “I am grateful for Pistorius' flash of greatness, and I am sad if he has fallen from it"(CNN). This article provides an example of the positive response some may have to the incident that occurred. Conversely, others may respond negatively to the issue. In an article in Slate, William Saletan voices his disgust for Oscar Pistorius. In this writing he expands on facts known from different news sources. Saletan uses the basic information of how the murder occurred and the layout of the house to analyze the affidavit of Pistorius. In conclusion to his piece Saletan says, “You’ve raised, in Oscar, a fine hunter. An animal, in fact. When care and thought were required, he moved with ruthless haste to defend his territory, even at the risk—and the expense—of a young woman’s life"(Slate). Saletan offers his own opinion to the Pistorius piece that sheds negative light on the Paralympian runner. Both of these opinion pieces are aimed at audiences who have followed the story throughout the entire 'news sphere' web. These two authors express their own opinions in the hopes of swaying their readers to share the same views or argue against them. In the 'news sphere' these articles may seem like the final step in the development of a news story however, they introduce entirely new avenues of thought by provoking readers who either agree or disagree to explore their own opinions. If readers were to comment on the two pieces written by these authors, the story could follow a completely different path from the original story. This path would show the shift from news to opinion which is commonly observed in 'news spheres that have grown to a large extent.
                        As a news story develops overtime it is constantly subjected to change. These changes may come from the addition of more facts or from the opinion of the writer. No matter the type of change, the changes are crucial to the growth of a story. Changes provide more insight and depth to an event that occurs and allows a larger range of people to relate to the issue. These changes are crucial to both the development of a story as well as to the 'news sphere' that surrounds it. The 'news sphere' allows the story to be connected between multiple sources as well as multiple people. Although the concept of the 'news sphere' is not one that is discussed often, it is generally the pattern observed as any news story is reported. In the example of Oscar Pistorius, the story of murder was surrounded by a multitude of news sources. These sources ranged from an initial news report to a negatively opinionated article in a magazine. This 'news sphere' was also expanded by the geographic range in which the story was covered. A story that began in Africa was reported in the United States only to be related back to African news sources in an American news report. The growth of the 'news sphere' surrounding Oscar Pistorius is an interesting one to follow, and it is a perfect example of how a simple story can expand beyond boarders and audiences as it changes over time. 
















Works Cited

Farlardeau, Cynthia. "What my son taught me about Oscar Pistorius." CNN Opinion. Cable news             network, Turner Broadcasting System. 20 Feb. 2013. Web. 27 Feb. 2013.             <http://www.cnn.com/2013/02/19/opinion/pistorius-commentary-irpt>

Polgreen, Lydia. "A Nation Reels as a Star Runner Is Charged in Girlfriend's Death." The New     York Times. The New York Times Company. 15 Feb. 2013. Web. 27 Feb. 2013.             <http://www.nytimes.com/2013/02/15/sports/oscar-pistorius-shooting-south-          africa.html?ref=africa&_r=1&>

Saletan, William. "The Slaughter of Reeva Steenkamp." Slate. The Slate Group, a Division of        the Washington Post Company. 16 Feb. 2013. Web. 27 Feb. 2013.             <http://www.slate.com/articles/health_and_science/human_nature/2013/02/if_oscar_pisto            rius_is_telling_the_truth_about_reeva_steenkamp_he_s_a_dangerous.single.html>

Sapa. "Pistorius arrested after woman shot dead." iolnews. Independent Online, a Division of       Independent Newspapers Limited. 14 Feb. 2013. Web. 27 Feb. 2013.      <http://www.iol.co.za/news/crime-courts/pistorius-arrested-after-woman-shot-dead-       1.1469990#.UTlk2ldvBFu>

"South African newspaper sheds doubt on Oscar Pistorius' accidental shooting claim." CBS          News. CBS Interactive Inc.. 17 Feb. 2013. Web. 27 Feb. 2013.   <http://www.cbsnews.com/8301-202_162-57569799/south-african-newspaper-sheds-       doubt-on-oscar-pistorius-accidental-shooting-claim/>


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