Tuesday, February 26, 2013

Short Essay 2



Neighbors Kill Neighbors as Kenyan Vote Stirs Old Feuds
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            When picking up The New York Times on Thursday February 21, 2013 readers were confronted by a shocking image of a baby swaddled in her mother’s arms with a gash across the back of her head. This image causes an immediate emotional response within the reader, causing them to formulate a story of their own, or causing them to question why such a horrendous event occurred. The story formulated by the reader is often more horrific than the actual story, however, this is the reaction newspapers want. They want their reader to become emotionally invested before they deliver the facts. This technique causes readers to invest more time and thought to the issue at hand and in turn may cause a response. The response may vary, it could be that the reader buys the paper tomorrow to follow the story or it may be that the reader finds some way to help those who are suffering. Whatever the response may be, it was initially sparked by the emotional connection to the picture on the front page.
            When first viewing this picture, ones thoughts immediately shift to the nation of Africa and the ethnic wars that have taken place there throughout history. Unfortunately, this issue is one that is common to the country and many Americans are used to reports on mass killing among African people. Some readers may connect this issue to those of the Rwandan genocide or the continued ethnic battle in the Sudan. Either of these connections causes the reader to feel sympathy for the child in the picture and the hardships she has been through. Once the initial shock of the image subsides the reader can look at the caption. The caption offers basic information that ties the image to the story. In the case of this image, the reader discovers that this girl is in fact 9 month old Rahema Hageyo, and that she was “slashed by a machete when raiders from a rival ethnic group attacked her Kenyan village in December”. Once these basic facts have been established, the reader can make new connections. They now know that the story is one of ethnic issues that have grown violent in Kenya. With these few facts and the emotional connection to Rahema the reader now moves on to the details within the reported story.
            Currently in Kenya there is an ethnic war happening between the Pokomo and the Orma. Pokomo elder Elisha Bwora says there are “three reasons for this war…tribe, land and politics”. Although the first two reasons are just as important, the most pressing is that of politics. Kenya is currently in the middle of electing new leaders. The last time this vote occurred was in 2007 and it had disastrous results, 1,000 people were dead and the country was in shambles. As the current election goes on, history seems to be repeating itself. With 200 people already dead the two tribes continue to fight, accusing each other of “burning villages and birth certificates”. With past tensions playing out and current tensions fueling the fire, it is unclear who will win the election and what the following repercussions may be.
            After reading the story it becomes clear that the issue at hand is political tension that has boiled over into warfare. Comparing this issue to the United States, the reader may become confused or even angered since the United States deals with elections every four years and never has it resulted in warfare. The confusion is created from the content of the story, but the emotional response is aroused by the original picture. This emotional response comes from the realization that due to this political issue a little 9 month old girl was harmed. Rahema is nowhere near old enough to vote and yet someone decided to slash her across the head with a machete. The story is about a political issue however, the main message that is intended to be the focus is the disastrous effects that this issue has aroused.  
            This picture demonstrates how newspapers purposely use images to influence the reader’s response to an article. In this case, The New York Times used the tragedy of harming a little girl to cause the reader to recognize the corruption in Africa. Purposeful placement is also used, in that the captioned picture as well as the story is placed on the front page. Instead of focusing on the issue of politics the reader focuses on the tragedies that these people inflict upon one another. The image is the most powerful part of this news story, and the emotional response it creates is its intended purpose.


Short Essay 2 Workshop-Alexander
Review Questions

1.                  Is the image analyzed in relationship to a larger story, and what is that story?
                        Yes, it is analyzed in relationship to a larger story, which is primarily about injuries          in Kenya that are due to ethnic issues.  The first paragraph of the story already gives you   a gruesome description of an injury inflicted upon a 9 month old child.
2.                  How is the image analyzed?
                        She mentions the “ethnic wars” that have occurred in Africa for decades now and            how that was one of the authors first thoughts.  The author also states how one might         gain a sort of emotional compassion for a little girl who has done nothing wrong.
3.                  What do you find most interesting about the analysis?
                        I liked how the author supplied us with a bit of background information on what   has being going on in Kenya and what is causing these ethnic issues particularly.
4.                  What is most confusing or in need of greater attention or explanation?
                        I didn't find anything confusing or that needed greater attention or explanation.
5.                  Any other comments or suggestions for revision.
                        I thought you chose a good image considering how emotionally stirred some        people might get when they see it.

Short Essay 2 Workshop
Review Questions
Review name: Jordyn Theisen
1.      Is the image analyzed in relationship to a larger story, and what is that story?
            Yes the image is analyzed in relationship to a larger story. The larger story is that two tribes in Kenya, the Pokomo and the Orma, are currently involved in ethnic war over their different tribes, land and politics. Kenya is currently in the middle of electing new leaders for their country and this has sparked increased violence between the two tribes.
2.      How is the image analyzed? (What are they looking at, how it’s composed, emotional content, etc.)
            The image is first analyzed by what it contains and how this would make readers have an immediate emotional response. She then talks about how readers will first create their own stories of why the child is cut across the back of the head. Then the placement of the image is analyzed and what responses this causes. Later, the caption of the picture is analyzed and how this changes what the readers think of the pictures or what emotional connections they make. Finally, the image is seen as being there to evoke a more emotional response for the families affected by the violence in Kenya than a political response for the elections going on there.
3.      What do you find most interesting about the analysis?
            I like how you talk about how the reader first creates its own story of what happened to the child in the picture. This relates to the reading we did over images and their relation to stories, which is a nice touch.
4.      What is most confusing or in need of greater attention or explanation?
            The response the readers have to the image and to the story are very different. This makes it hard to understand what the story was actually about (like what the author wanted you to get from it) and so then it’s hard to understand how well the image and the story relate. Clarifying that part would help.
5.      Other comments and suggestions
            I thought you analyzed the picture very well and it was easy to read because of how you broke the analysis down. 

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